I can visualize how I want my work to look, but doing it digitally and putting it all together, is something I'm finding a little frustrating. There are a lot of elements I dislike, and little parts which I need to alter, I don't think it quite works at the minute. I would love feedback, I feel a bit stuck after staring at it for so long, I need some fresh eyes to tell me what's wrong with it. I don't know if Im being too critical, but I'm pretty much out of my comfort zone.
So any comments would be appreciated!
Playing about with Typography, and brushes.