After the crit, Im going to put in the letter R in the word across becuase i missed it out. I'm going to make the background slightly lighter. The Main feedback I recieved from the crit was that its too busy and too full of information, its a little bombarding. I'm a little dissappointed, because im a perfectionist and take life too seriously. Im itching to do it agagin, but maybe i should just learn for next time and remember life is about learning.